wii under the sea

wii under the sea

is this a good sonnet?

your friendship means so much to me
when i am down you turn my frown upside down
you like to sit under the big blue tree
i hate to see you in the color brown
we both scream when we see a bee
when our favorite song comes on we always have a melt down
your my best friend can't you see
on friday nights we go downtown.
one day we want to go out to sea.
you love to be a class clown
we like to watch william wobble the wii.

can you give me any suggestions i need 3 more lines can anyone help me and rate it from one to 10 and tell me what i need to fix
here are the last three lines
even though sometimes you make me frown
i know you dont mean to put me down
thats why you will always be my special clown

NICE !
10.1
the bee part made me smile

video 1 UNDER THE SEA / mario bros wii

Way too cool Gadgets

In today's high tech world it isn't easy trying to figure out which cool gadgets are coolest, but in a sea of handy gizmos, these are my five wicked cool gadgets.

1. Sony's eBook Reader: Sleek and compact, this hand-held reader can hold 160 e-books on its own and even more with a memory card. I am a voracious reader and this cool tool lets me take my whole library along wherever I go. Recipes, reference materials, study guides and entertainment are at your fingertips with Sony's reader. Downloading from Sony's online store is a snap and the selection of titles is massive. $300.00 is a steal for a device that crams a world of knowledge into your back pocket.

2. Garmin Nuvi 660 GPS: Complete with real-time traffic tracking, this $700.00 unit allows you to re-calculate your route with the push of a button before you get into trouble. If you're unfamiliar with the area, let Nuvi suggest alternate routes for you. There's a $60.00 annual fee for the tracking service which pays for itself in fuel savings in no time.

3. APC Biometric Password Reader: This fingerprint reader is a great way to safeguard all of your important computer files, is smaller than a mouse, allows for the registration of up to 20 fingerprints and can be had for around $50.00. It's easy to install and use, the built-in software talks you right through the process. If you've got data you want to protect, this is a great way to do it without breaking the bank.

4. Nintendo Wii Game System: Maybe this one should rank higher than fourth because it is the first gadget I've ever owned that actually gets your bottom out of a chair, but it is still a game console after all. Equipped with a fitness module, the Wii will provide endless hours of active fun for your family and helps track fitness goals as well. Since this hot item joined the family, my living room has become the place to be. Simple to hook up, there's a slight learning curve to using the remote and nunchuk, but the games are so addictive you'll feel like a pro by the end of day one. Not only do the players have a good time, most Wii games make great spectator sport. This is the best $250.00 I've ever spent. I can't stop bowling. I really can't.

5. Meade CaptureView 8X42 2MP Digital Camera Binocular with LCD Screen: Sitting in the cheap seats at your daughter's recital? Getting a nosebleed at your son's football game? The Meade CaptureView Binocular/Digital Camera solves the problem for a cool $160.00. It beats the zoom feature on a regular digital camera because you can watch events through the binoculars. At only 2 megapixels, it's a bit on the low-tech side but higher megapixel units are on the near horizon. Give this technology time and you'll be bird watching and practicing your nature photography all with one cool gadget. Did I mention it records video too? Add a memory card and you're good to go.

About the Author

I have been writing for years now and have just started turning this one time hobby into a lucrative part time job. I write mostly on tech topics, but have recently diversified into education, parenting and the supernatural